将下列对话以第三人称改写成短文(实用3篇)

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篇一:一次偶遇

小明和小红是大学的同班同学,他们之间一直保持着友谊。有一天,小明突然在校园里看到了小红,他们走到一起开始交谈。

小明问:“小红,你最近怎么样?”

小红回答:“我还好,但是最近有点忙。我要准备参加一个比赛。”

小明好奇地问:“是什么比赛呢?”

小红笑着说:“是一个摄影比赛,我一直对摄影很感兴趣,所以想试试看。”

小明赞赏地说:“那真是太棒了!你一定会取得好成绩的。”

小红谦虚地说:“谢谢你的鼓励,我会尽力的。”

他们继续聊了一会儿,然后小红突然问道:“小明,你最近有什么计划吗?”

小明有些犹豫地回答:“其实,我最近在考虑要不要申请出国留学。”

小红惊讶地看着小明说:“真的吗?那你一定要好好考虑清楚,出国留学可是个大决定。”

小明点点头说:“是的,我知道。我正在考虑各种因素,包括学术和生活方面。”

小红鼓励地说:“我相信你会做出正确的决定的。不管你最后选择什么,我都支持你。”

小明感激地看着小红说:“谢谢你的支持,小红。你的友谊对我来说很重要。”

他们继续在校园里漫步,享受着彼此的陪伴。虽然他们的未来可能会有所不同,但他们的友谊将永远保持。

篇二:重新相遇

小明和小红曾经是小学的同班同学,但是后来因为转学而失去了联系。多年后的一天,他们偶然在街上相遇了。

小明看到小红后非常兴奋,他走过去打招呼:“小红,好久不见!你还记得我吗?”

小红疑惑地看着小明,然后突然眼睛亮起来:“小明!是你吗?当然我还记得你!”

他们兴奋地拥抱在一起,然后开始交谈起来。

小明问:“小红,这些年你过得怎么样?”

小红笑着说:“我过得还不错。我现在在一家大公司工作,事业一直在进步。”

小明赞赏地说:“太棒了!你一定是个很有能力的人。”

小红谦虚地说:“谢谢你的夸奖,其实我一直在努力学习和工作。”

他们继续聊了一会儿,然后小明突然问道:“小红,你有没有时间明天一起吃饭呢?我们可以好好聊聊。”

小红高兴地答应:“当然可以!我很乐意和你见面。”

他们约定了时间和地点,然后继续在街上漫步。他们回忆起过去的点点滴滴,分享着彼此的近况。虽然他们曾经失去了联系,但现在他们重新相遇,友谊更加坚固。

将下列对话以第三人称改写成短文 篇三

将下列对话以第三人称改写成一篇110左右单词的短文。

DialogueThe year is 1963 in the USA。Two men are talking in prison。A:Why are you in here B:I was on the march。

A:What march B:Haven"t you heard There was a big civil rights march through the center of Birmingham yesterday。A:Why was that B:I imagine you"re not very interested in politics。A:I"m a stranger here。

I"m from the west coast。Tell me more。B:It"s like this。

We black people of Birmingham want equal rights。We want the same rights as the white people in the city。For years we

"ve been demanding better housing and jobs。

A:So you"re telling me that the situation here is bad for black people。B:That"s right。We"re not treated as equal citizens。

We cant" go to the public parks or swimming pools。It"s forbidden。A:What happened on the march then B:I joined in the march and we were marching peacefully along and then the police came up。

They told us to go home but we went on。They said that the march had been forbidden,but that wasn"t true。They hit us with their sticks over and over again and put some of us in prison。

A:I imagine that hurt a lot。B:Yes,my whole body hurts。

The story took place in 1963,when the black people were not treated as equally as the white people in the USA。They were not permitted to go to the public parks or swimming pools。Besides,their housing was in poor conditions and they did very heavy work。

To demand the same rights as the whites,black people of Birmingham marched along the street peacefully。But the police wanted to stop them by hitting them with their sticks over and over again。The black people did not give up even though some of them were put into prison。

They decided to go on strike until they won the fight against racial discrimination。

【解题导引】本对话反映了20世纪50年代后期到60年代美国黑人为争取和维护平等的公民权而举行大规模民权示威游行,兴起了少数民族争取民主权利的群众运动以及遭到美国当局镇压的情况,揭示了美国种族隔离,种族歧视的黑暗现象。短文需通过一些事例来揭示这一主题:

1)黑人不公平的遭遇:①We"renottreatedasequalcitizens。②Wecan"tgotothepublicparksorswimmingpools。

2)黑人反抗行为:①WewantthesamerightsasthewhitepeopleinBirmingham。②Wedemandbetterhousingandjobs。③Wejoininthemarchandmarchpeacefully。

3)美国当局镇压黑人的行径:①Thepolicecomeupandtellustogohome。②Theywanttoforbidthemarch。③Theyhituswiththeirsticksoverandoveragain。

④Theyputsomeofusinprison。在改写成短文过程中,除了在内容要点上要覆盖上述几点,还必须注意几个问题:

1)人称改用第三人称;

2)时态应用过去时;

3)连接自然,行文流畅。

将下列对话以第三人称改写成短文(实用3篇)

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