染雾《童年趣事》 篇一
小时候，我住在一个小村庄里，周围都是绿油油的田野和高大的果树。每当夏天到来，我就迫不及待地和小伙伴们一起去果园里采摘水果，这是我童年最美好的回忆之一。
我最喜欢的水果是樱桃，它红彤彤的外表和鲜美的味道总能让我欲罢不能。每年夏天，当樱桃树上挂满了饱满的果实时，我就和小伙伴们一起拿着篮子来到果园。我们小心翼翼地爬上樱桃树，摘下一个个红彤彤的樱桃，然后放进篮子里。摘樱桃的过程中，我们总是开心地笑着，互相比赛谁能摘到更多的樱桃。当篮子装满了樱桃，我们就满足地坐在果园里，一边吃樱桃，一边聊天打闹，度过了一个美妙的夏日午后。
除了樱桃，我还喜欢采摘葡萄。每当葡萄成熟的时候，果园里的葡萄藤上挂满了紫黑色的葡萄串，散发着诱人的香气。我们小伙伴们拿着剪刀和篮子，轻轻地剪下一串串葡萄，然后放进篮子里。采摘葡萄的过程中，我们还会偷偷地吃几颗葡萄，那种酸甜的味道让人回味无穷。采摘完毕后，我们就会坐在果园里，一边吃葡萄，一边分享着童年的趣事和梦想。
小时候的童年趣事，总是让我感受到无尽的快乐和自由。在果园里采摘水果的过程中，我不仅收获了水果的甜美，还收获了友谊的温暖。那段美好的时光已经过去了，但它们永远留在我的记忆中，成为我人生中最珍贵的宝藏。
《童年趣事》 篇二
小时候，我住在城市里，周围都是高楼大厦和熙熙攘攘的人群。尽管没有绿油油的田野和果树，但我依然有许多有趣的童年回忆。
我最喜欢的玩具是风筝。每当风筝节到来，我就迫不及待地和小伙伴们一起去放风筝。我们在公园里找一片开阔的草地，然后展开五颜六色的风筝，系上长长的线。当风吹起的时候，我们就让风筝在天空中飞翔。看着风筝在蓝天白云中飞舞，我感到无比的自由和快乐。有时候，我们还会比赛谁的风筝能飞得更高更远，这让整个放风筝的过程更加有趣和刺激。
除了放风筝，我还喜欢玩捉迷藏。我们在小区的花园里找一个安全的地方做基地，然后轮流当“追捕者”和“藏匿者”。当“追捕者”开始数数的时候，其他人就会四处寻找藏匿的地方。有时候，我会躲在花丛中，有时候会躲在树后面，每次被找到的时候，我都会感到一阵好玩的紧张和刺激。而当我成功地找到其他人的时候，我会兴奋地大喊胜利，整个人都洋溢着快乐的笑容。
小时候的童年趣事，虽然没有田野和果园，但它们同样充满了快乐和惊喜。飞翔在天空中的风筝和躲藏在花园中的捉迷藏，每一次的游戏都让我感受到无尽的童真和快乐。这些美好的回忆已经成为我人生中最宝贵的财富，让我对童年充满了美好的回忆和感激之情。
《童年趣事》 篇三
我的童年是五彩缤纷的，在我的童年里流淌着纯真和甜美，总会使人产生难以忘怀的回忆。
My childhood is colorful, flowing with innocence and sweetness in my childhood, always making people have unforgettable memories.
记得在我5岁的时候，一个春光明媚的星期天，我正在房间里自由自在地玩耍着......忽然，从大厅传来一阵“嗡嗡嗡”的响声，我闻声赶过来，只见爸爸坐 在沙发上，架起二郎腿，手里拿着一件奇形怪状的东西在剃胡子，我睁大眼睛，迷惑不解地问爸爸：“爸爸，这是啥东西？”“噢，你问这个是吧？这是专门帮爸爸 剃胡子的小助手！”话音刚落，爸爸又眉开眼笑地剃着胡子，那样子真让人羡慕。我呆呆地站在那儿，若有所思.......
I remember when I was 5 years old, on a sunny spring Sunday, I was playing freely in my room... Suddenly, there was a "buzzing" noise from the hall, I heard it and rushed to my father's seat On the sofa, I set up my legs, and I was shaving with a strange thing in my hand. I opened my eyes wide and asked my father in bewilderment, "Dad, what is this?" "Oh, you ask that, don't you? This is a little assistant who helps dad shave! " As soon as the voice came down, Dad shaved his beard with a smile on his face, which was really enviable. I stood there in a daze, thinking
第二天早晨，我起床后，无意中发现我家的小白狗的嘴边长着几根长长的胡子，顿时我眼睛一亮：嗨，用爸爸的“超级武器”帮小狗整理一下“发型”。我为自己的 小聪明而手舞足蹈。说干就干，我环顾“四周”，觉得非常安全，我便采取了行动，我蹑手蹑脚来到爸爸房间。哈，不费吹灰之力就找到了那个怪东西，我又蹦又跳 的，甭提有多高兴了！来到院子，我抓起小白狗，不管三七二十一，三下两下就把小白狗的胡子剃得一干二净了。我看着自己的“杰作”非常开心，心想：爸妈回来 后，肯定会好好夸奖我一番的......更多：关于童年趣事的作文
The next morning, when I got up, I found that my little white dog had several long moustaches on his mouth. My eyes lit up: Hey, use dad's "super weapon" to help the dog tidy up his "hair style". I'm dancing for my cleverness. Say do it, I look around and think it's very safe, so I take action, I tiptoe to Dad's room. Ha, I found that strange thing without any effort. I jumped and jumped again and again. How happy I am! When I came to the yard, I picked up the little white dog. No matter what, I shaved his beard completely. Looking at my "masterpiece", I was very happy, thinking: when my parents come back, I will definitely praise me... More: composition about interesting stories of childhood
夜幕降临，妈妈终于下班了，我嬉皮笑脸地向妈妈讲述了今天发生的事，妈妈听后，被我那天真的举动弄得哭笑不得，我真是丈二和尚—摸不着头脑。妈妈语重心长地对我说：“狗的胡子对它有极大的帮助，不能随便乱剪帮助。等你长大后，自己去查资料就会明白。”
When night fell, my mother finally got off work. I told my mother what happened today with a smile on my face. After listening to it, my moth
随着岁月的流逝，这已是我心中一个曾让我细细回味的音符了。每当想起这件事，我总会捧腹大笑。这也是我心中布满欢乐的“日记”。
With the passage of time, this has been a note in my heart that I have been savoring. Whenever I think about it, I always laugh. This is also my heart full of joy "diary".
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1.小作者向我们讲述了他童年时曾做过的一件荒唐事—在好奇心的驱使下，用“剃须刀”为小狗理了新发型，本是好意，怎知是违背规律办了错事。故事情节具体生动，结构完整。
1. The little author tells us about a ridiculous thing he did in his childhood. Driven by curiosity, he used a "razor" to get a new hair style for the dog. It was a good idea, but how could he know that he did something wrong against the law. The plot is concrete and vivid with complete structure.
2.文章对人物神态及动作描写生动形象，对话符合人物身份。“我”0的心理活动也刻画的真实准确，将一个天真可爱的孩子形象生动地展现在我们面前。
2. The article describes the characters' expression and action vividly, and the dialogue conforms to the characters' identity. The psychological activities of "I" 0 are also true and accurate, which vividly displays a naive and lovely child in front of us.
3.语言自然流畅，条理清晰，充满生活气息。
3. The language is natural and fluent, clear and full of life atmosphere.
