染雾每当存亡的时刻 篇一
在人类历史的长河中，有许多时刻都是存亡的关键节点。这些时刻往往是伴随着巨大风险和巨大机遇的。而在这些存亡之际，人们的决策和行动将决定一个国家、一个民族的命运。
一个典型的例子就是二战期间的英国。1940年，希特勒的纳粹德国在欧洲大陆展开了闪电战，几乎一举占领了整个西欧。英国成了最后一个抵抗纳粹德国的堡垒。在那个时刻，英国的存亡岌岌可危。然而，英国的首相丘吉尔没有选择向希特勒投降，而是坚定地领导英国人民抵抗。他在国会发表了著名的“我们将在海滩上作战”演讲，号召全国人民共同面对困难和危险。最终，英国人民坚定地支持了丘吉尔，英国成功抵挡了纳粹德国的进攻，最终取得了胜利。
另一个例子是中国的抗日战争。在二战期间，日本侵略者占领了中国的大部分领土，中国陷入了存亡的危机。然而，中国人民没有放弃，而是组织了抗日民族统一战线，进行了长期的抗战。中国人民用自己的血肉之躯和无数的牺牲，维护了国家的尊严和民族的独立。最终，中国人民战胜了日本侵略者，赢得了抗日战争的胜利。
这些存亡的时刻不仅仅是一个国家、一个民族的命运，也是全人类的命运。在面对共同的威胁时，人类必须团结一致，共同抵抗。只有通过团结合作和共同努力，才能战胜困难，取得胜利。
每当存亡的时刻 篇二
每当存亡的时刻，人们通常会面临巨大的压力和挑战。然而，这些时刻也是人们展现勇气和智慧的机会。
一个典型的例子是美国的独立战争。在18世纪末，美国的殖民地决定与英国王室分道扬镳，寻求独立。这是一个存亡的时刻，因为英国是当时最强大的帝国之一，而美国只是一个新兴的殖民地。然而，美国的领导人并没有被这些困难吓倒，他们坚信自由和独立的价值，勇敢地领导人民进行了长期的战斗。最终，美国成功赢得了独立，并成为了一个独立自由的国家。
另一个例子是南非的种族隔离制度的终结。在上世纪的二战后，南非实行了种族隔离制度，黑人和白人被严格分离，黑人被剥夺了基本的权利和尊严。然而，随着全球反种族隔离运动的兴起，南非的种族隔离制度面临了巨大的压力。在这个存亡的时刻，南非的领导人和民众团结一致，展现出了极大的勇气和智慧。最终，南非成功废除了种族隔离制度，实现了种族和解与平等。
每当存亡的时刻，人们需要勇气和智慧来应对挑战。只有在困难面前坚定不移，才能战胜困难，取得胜利。这些存亡的时刻也是人们展现出团结和合作的机会。只有通过团结合作，人们才能共同面对挑战，共同创造美好的未来。
每当存亡的时刻 篇三
当海浪又一次温柔地涌上沙滩的时候，海龟们又一次战战兢兢地钻出沙穴，在它们面前的是一条满是希望和危险的路，可能是光明的未来，也可能是残酷的终结。存亡的时刻，总是难以抉择。这个时刻，是一只柔弱却又无比坚强的小海龟站了出来，肩负着整个种群的希望与使命，虽然这一别可能是最后一别。且不管它最后是否因为那个好心人的救助辜负了大家的期望，至少在这一刻，它小小的背影在落日的余晖下是那么的雄伟与悲壮。
When the waves come up to the beach again, the turtles drill out of the sand hole again with fear. In front of them is a road full of hope and danger, which may be a bright future or a
望着小海龟离去的背影，时间仿佛回到千年以前，沙滩仿佛也卷起了波浪，好似易水旁，太子丹亲手给即将刺秦的荆轲斟上饯行的酒。这一刻，飞鸟也为之徘徊；这一刻，壮士也为之落泪；这一刻，又何必计较这位英雄的成功与失败。悲伤，不一定需要太多的眼泪；感动，不一定需要太多的辞藻。也许，他并没有拯救这个国家于危难，但是在存亡的时刻，他站了出来，牺牲了小我，成就了大义。
Looking at the back of the little turtle's departure, time seems to return to a thousand years ago, the beach seems to have rolled up waves, like the Yi water side, Prince Dan poured the farewell wine on Jingke, who was about to be assassinated by Qin Dynasty. At this moment, the birds also linger for it; at this moment, the heroes also cry for it; at this moment, why bother about the success and failure of this hero. Sadness doesn't need too many tears; moving doesn't need too many words. Perhaps, he did not save the country in crisis, but in the moment of survival, he stood up, sacrificed the ego, and achieved great justice.
中华民族，这个有着悠久历史的民族，免不了兴衰与荣辱；中华民族，这个素来坚强不屈的民族，注定在存亡的时刻，从来都不缺为了民族流血甚至牺牲的英雄。无论是冬天里席卷半个中国的雪灾，还是刚刚发生的牵动每一个炎黄子孙的汶川地震，总有那么多勇于奉献、勇于牺牲的人们站出来。无论是在地震第一线，踏着残垣与断壁，给黑暗中的人带去光明与希望的武警官兵们，还是在城市的街头拿着募捐箱传递爱心的志愿者们；无论是在无数条承载着爱心与关怀的公路、铁路上，为了运送救灾物资几天几夜没合眼的司机们，还是在工厂里熬夜加班，赶制帐篷、生活用品的工人们；再或者是举国上下，通过各种方式表达自己对受灾地区的关心与爱心的所有人们。也许，我们无从得知他们的名字；也许，没有人知道他们身上有着怎样的故事，但不管是谁，听到这样的故事，都会觉得正是这些默默奉献、默默牺牲的人，才会在民族与国家存亡的时刻，排除万难，力挽狂澜，并将这种精神一脉相传。
The Chinese nation, a nation with a long history, is bound to rise and fall, honor and disgrace; the Chinese nation, a nation that has always been strong and unyielding, is destined to have no lack of heroes who bleed or even sacrifice for the nation at the time of survival. No matter the snow disaster sweeping half of China in winter or the Wenchuan earthquake just happened, there are always so many people who have the courage to sacrifice. No matter in the front line of the earthquake, the armed police officers and soldiers who step on the ruins and walls to bring light and hope to the people in the dark, or the volunteers who carry donation boxes to deliver love on the streets of the city; no matter on countless roads and railways carrying love and care, the drivers who have not closed their eyes for several days or nights to deliver disaster relief materials, or stay up late and work overtime in the factory to catch up The workers who make tents and daily necessities, or all the people of the whole country who express their concern and love for the disaster area in various ways. Perhaps, we have no way to know their names; perhaps, no one knows what kind of stories they have, but no matter who hears such stories, they will feel that it is these people who make silent contributions and sacrifice, in the time of the survival of the nation and the country, to eliminate all difficulties, turn back the tide, and pass on this spirit in one continuous line.
没有一个人可以永生，没有一个民族可以总是风调雨顺、国泰民安，然而，只要我们每个人都存有这样一份勇于奉献的信念，这样一份勇于牺牲的精神，那么，即使将来遇到再大的风雨，我们都可以说，我们的民族之魂仍在，我们的民族之魂永在！
No one can live forever, no nation can always be in good weather, the country is peaceful and the people are safe. However, as long as each of us has such a faith of brave dedication, such a spirit of brave sacrifice, then, even if there is any storm in the future, we can say that the soul of our nation is still there, and the soul of our nation is forever!
【失分警示】
[point loss warning]
如果脱离供料就文论文，本文写得还是不错的，其中心明确，语言简练；文中既有历史人物荆轲这个“点”，又有雪灾、地震中勇于奉献、牺牲的人们这个“面”；结尾段的概括，还充盈着一股饱满的气势。
If the paper is written without any materials, it is well written, with a clear center and concise language. There are not only historical figures Jing Ke, but also people who are brave to sacrifice in the snow disaster and earthquake. The summary of the end section is also full of a full momentum.
但是，衡量一篇考场作文优劣的前提和基础，理应是看它是否符合题意。本文的切入点为“这个时刻，是一只柔弱却又无比坚强的小海龟站了出来，肩负着整个种群的希望与使命……”而作文材料中的表述却是“原来，先出来的那只幼龟是个‘侦察兵’，一旦遇到危险，它便缩回去”，这里的“缩回去”，明确无误地表示着幼龟并不需要冒什么风险(也就是说，《每当存亡的时刻》一文立意的出发点，是有违材料含意的)。因此，该文只能判为不及格。
However, the premise and basis for measuring the quality of an examination composition should be to see whether it conforms to the meaning of the question. The starting point of this paper is "at this moment, a weak but extremely strong little turtle came out and shouldered the hope and mission of the whole population..." But the expression in the composition material is "originally, the first out turtle is a 'Scout', once it is in danger, it will shrink back". The "shrink back" here clearly indicates that the turtle does not need to take any risk (that is to say, the starting point of the article "every moment of survival" is contrary to the meaning of the material). Therefore, the article can only be judged as failing.
